the day before Halloween
Tomorrow is Halloween, yay! Here's what i'm gona be... a Unicorn! the best creature ever right? well i'm gona be one anyways. Halloween is my second favorite holaday. My dog is just gona wear glasses, my mom is gona be a mummy, and my dad is gona be a wolf. Today we're wearing our costumes to school and had a best costume contest and i got 2nd place. 1st was a super light up costume. i told my friend about what my dog was doing and I heard him say to someone, and the dog was wearing glasses. THE END
This sounds similar to another story I have read. Make sure that you are thinking up your own creative ideas. Remember that i is capitalized when talking about yourself. You start of with lots of energy and excitement but the ending is seems rushed.
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