Thursday 12 October 2017

100 WC week 5

My most treasured item

I got for my 11th birthday and i practice with it atleast twice a week. Ever since i watched the elves from the Hobbit, I practiced and practiced. I'd call my friends to practice or have a competition. I treasure it because I've wanted it for years and I feel more confident with my responsibility wielding  a weapon people made  many years ago. It's made of heavy metal, pulleys, a site and a string to pull back with my release. sometimes i would fiddle with the release. That is my most treasured item.
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1 comment:

  1. Unknown14 October 2017 at 12:58

    It sounds like a sword that you take good care of. Be sure to read over your writing as some capitals are missing. I wonder how you can use more powerful language in your writing. Your best sentence is when you describe your responsibility and confidence of taking care of your sword.

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